前半部分還行結(jié)尾匆匆收?qǐng)隽?感覺(jué)結(jié)尾可以make it clearer在我看來(lái)邏輯不是那么通順有為說(shuō)大道理而強(qiáng)行結(jié)局之嫌兩條線的處理還是不錯(cuò)的兩條交叉線一條給大人看一條給孩子看給大人看的那條線確實(shí)讓我有思考如果可以我愿意為了快樂(lè)放棄一切我就是唯快樂(lè)主義
All the secondary characters - past and present - in stories and stories within stories, write stories to realize themselves, tangible and fleeting like dreams.